Ive got one more chapter to go on my book but i really wanna know what others besides my loved ones think help?

I don't want to be harsh, but all I can say is that although you put your heart and soul into writing this book others may not be able to feel the same way. If you write with an engrossing style and have the experiences to make a wrenching and interesting story, the book should be a good read. Otherwise you need editing editing editing if what you care about is the quality of your book. But if you wrote this just for yourself, then by all means congratulations.